Winter by Liana
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Raindrops pouring down the steps drip drop drip drop
the weather getting colder and colder
Im at home reading a book pages go flick,flick,flick
A hail storm appears then after a bit it disappears
Inside it's also cold so I grab a mug and make some hot chocolate
Slurp slurp slurp what a yummy hot chocolate
I'm bored at home staring out the window
Thinking about a flamingo
I'm running outside spreading my arms
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Oh my goodness Liana- this is beautiful! I just love the onomatopoeia you've included in your lovely poem! :)
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Mrs Logan Liana - your poem is wonderful! And it's a rainy cold day today and looking out my window I am thinking that your words describe the day perfectly. Mahi pai!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Liana, such a lot of imagery in your poem. I could smell the hot chocolate and hear the hail beating down on the roof and windows.
ReplyDeleteTino pai